Score: 10

"yeeyeye"

submission: Drive Thru at KFC

date: October 29, 2007

I love your animations so much. I've put you on my favourite artists. I really like this but not as much as some of your others I must admit. However I like it when the knights helmet kept closing, it was a nice touch.

Keep up the good -- no, no, keep up the fantastic work.

Score: 8

"Hahaha, cool"

submission: DOOMed_computer

date: October 28, 2007

I really loved this flash. I like your animating style and the voices were great. The humor wasn't very good as I thought there was going to be a much better ending punchline but otherwise it was very entertaining.

Too improve you need to: add shading, work on the backgrounds and perhaps when you do the voice of mario and luigi make them sound a bit more Italien.

Overall very good. I'd like to see more from you, oh and you spelt "computer" wrong in the title :)

Score: 7

"Hahaha. Cool."

submission: CandyHolics

date: October 27, 2007

Good Points:

The voices were good, very clear and suited the characters. The idea was pretty decent aswell, and it had a few funny jokes and refrences in there. The lip synching was perfect too :)

Bad Points:

The actual animation was pretty bad, meaning the movement of the characters was pretty jerky. Putting some tweens in there would have helped a lot or atleast a frame between the two movements would make it a whole deal better and smoother.

Overall:

It was enjoyable to watch. I can see you've put a lot of effort into this and it's payed off. I'm going to go check out your other stuff now.

Score: 9

"Hahaha"

submission: Blockhead Ghostmas

date: October 25, 2007

Crazy and Hilarious as usual :) I'm not sure if it's just me but you seemed to have picked up a new style of animation. Perhaps I'm just not very observant but either way it looks great.

Happy Ghostmas Mr Swain.

Score: 6

"Hey again :)"

submission: ShortShakespeare - Caeser

date: October 23, 2007

Hmm... that was alright I guess. I'm not sure what you were going for, either just a summary of the story or a comical summary. If you were going for funny perhaps make it a bit more in your face and random, otherwise it was decent.

It was very short, which is sometimes okay, but you need to make it more short and sweet. If it's going to be that short add shading and spend longer on the pictures.

Overall it was decent but I didn't really understand the story all too well so it didn't do it's job of summing it up :(

Keep up the good work anyhow.

Score: 8

"Wowy"

submission: Never On Your Own-special

date: October 23, 2007

That was such a fantastic story. The animation was great, ( most of the time ) the music was really relaxing and the extras were great, especially the commentary which made me laugh a lot.

Looking forward to your next flashes. Good job.

Score: 9

"Ohmygosh:o"

submission: One Million Pageviews

date: October 23, 2007

You used me ;(

Now make me moar cartoons >:C

Score: 9

"Best thing since sliced bread."

submission: EW Halloween Special

date: October 21, 2007

Haha, that was really funny. I love your style of drawing, not that neat but very bold and cartoony. Wouldn't be suprised if this one the halloween competition. So yeah... Goodluck with that :D

Score: 7

"Pure genious"

submission: William & The Mice

date: October 20, 2007

That was really funny :D The voice acting was great, as the narrator had such a calm voice as they usally do.

That put the "funk" in "Oh my gosh that's funkier than an octopus playing the bag pipes."

Score: 8

"hahaha :D"

submission: Toad's Super Adventure

date: October 14, 2007

I absolutely loved that :D I would prefer it if you could just go back to the last place you died because it gets a bit tedious playing the whole game again.

That was the cutest thing ever xD