Lazyfeet's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DOOMed_computer]

Hahaha, cool

I really loved this flash. I like your animating style and the voices were great. The humor wasn't very good as I thought there was going to be a much better ending punchline but otherwise it was very entertaining.

Too improve you need to: add shading, work on the backgrounds and perhaps when you do the voice of mario and luigi make them sound a bit more Italien.

Overall very good. I'd like to see more from you, oh and you spelt "computer" wrong in the title :)

RyanTime2 responds:

oh yea woops... and this is my firsta nd last flash possibly... and mario and luigi were "americanized" its t-shirts now and not the old school italian stuff... anywho I'll try to improve it...

[CandyHolics]

Hahaha. Cool.

Good Points:

The voices were good, very clear and suited the characters. The idea was pretty decent aswell, and it had a few funny jokes and refrences in there. The lip synching was perfect too :)

Bad Points:

The actual animation was pretty bad, meaning the movement of the characters was pretty jerky. Putting some tweens in there would have helped a lot or atleast a frame between the two movements would make it a whole deal better and smoother.

Overall:

It was enjoyable to watch. I can see you've put a lot of effort into this and it's payed off. I'm going to go check out your other stuff now.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, I am trying to improve on making my animations smoother, but thanks for the review and the criticism. I'll try adding more tween to see if that smooth things out. Thank you for the review.

[Blockhead Ghostmas]

Hahaha

Crazy and Hilarious as usual :) I'm not sure if it's just me but you seemed to have picked up a new style of animation. Perhaps I'm just not very observant but either way it looks great.

Happy Ghostmas Mr Swain.

[ShortShakespeare - Caeser]

Hey again :)

Hmm... that was alright I guess. I'm not sure what you were going for, either just a summary of the story or a comical summary. If you were going for funny perhaps make it a bit more in your face and random, otherwise it was decent.

It was very short, which is sometimes okay, but you need to make it more short and sweet. If it's going to be that short add shading and spend longer on the pictures.

Overall it was decent but I didn't really understand the story all too well so it didn't do it's job of summing it up :(

Keep up the good work anyhow.

Timsplosion responds:

Ah well, sorry this didn't live up to your expectations. It was mainly made out of boredom anyway. The basic story is that someone predicts that Caeser's gonna die, then his friend Brutus kills him. Personally I thought that it was summed up pretty well, but meh, each man to his own opinion.

[Never On Your Own-special]

Wowy

That was such a fantastic story. The animation was great, ( most of the time ) the music was really relaxing and the extras were great, especially the commentary which made me laugh a lot.

Looking forward to your next flashes. Good job.

studio-nightbird responds:

lolz. thanks. Yea the commentary was added for fun. I will say the animation is really bad. thanks for the review

[One Million Pageviews]

Ohmygosh:o

You used me ;(

Now make me moar cartoons >:C

[EW Halloween Special]

Best thing since sliced bread.

Haha, that was really funny. I love your style of drawing, not that neat but very bold and cartoony. Wouldn't be suprised if this one the halloween competition. So yeah... Goodluck with that :D

[William & The Mice]

Pure genious

That was really funny :D The voice acting was great, as the narrator had such a calm voice as they usally do.

That put the "funk" in "Oh my gosh that's funkier than an octopus playing the bag pipes."

[Cuboy Ep.2]

Oh my goodness :O

That was the best thing ever. If only you get make this into a game like habbo hotel or sims. If so it would be crazy insane >:D

[Deep Thoughts]

nice

I really liked that :D I thought it might have been better at the end the kid just let him and go and he said something like

"here goes"

Otherwise it was really good :)

NextToNothing responds:

Thanks, originally was going to make him pop... but as I was animating I figured I might want to make another one... I don't know if I will but it was a good way to pass some time.

=D