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[Daze of our Lives 4]

Review power :]

Yeah, I liked it. I really did. It had some charm to it which made it watchable and strangely like-able. However...

I thought the drawings were rather crude and a bit blocky and the animation wasn't really that fluent. I thought there should have been more of it as well as most of the time the characters were stationery and not really doing much :S

The voice acting was good, I liked the fact it was a group of friends just doing a fun lil cartoon. The script wasn't the best, some of the jokes fell heavy and the punch lines were expected but the whole thing was still of good quality and, despite the dramatic change of plot for understandable reasons, I liked the idea. I thought the second one was actually a bit better as it was less cliche.

The best thing about it was the special features really. I liked the commentary and deleted scene. You seem like friendly, funny people :)

The one thing, a small personal question, is how could he just decide he doesn't want to be your friend anymore? I didn't like the way you bad mouthed him to be honest so this reason better be sex tacular.

I'm a sucker for these kind of cartoons, as I made one myself. A couple of friends writing and voice acting a nice little story :P I thought it needed to be reviewed for that reason. I'd love to see more of these and I'm looking forward to seeing the score.

So overall, not the best animated and drawn cartoon but I still really liked it :) I hope you show your friends these reviews too. Make 'em put some funny input which I'm sure they're capable of [insert more kiss ass here.]

Anyhoo, I've rambled on for way too long, it shows how bored I am. Perhaps a 74 hour gaming session is what I need? ^_^ Keep up the good work blaw blawh.

MrBallistic responds:

Have you ever seen someone hit a dog? Yeeeah, thats what that friend did to me. Maybe i wasnt clear enough on what a fucker he is. Oh, and your going to need a 78 hour gaming session to break my record! Seriously though, this is the best review Iv ever seen. I shall take all of this into effect!

[BEEP BEEP]

I don't like writing reviews like this...

But sometimes these things need to be said. I have to say that was rather shocking, can you honestly say that you deserved front page, daily 5th and that high a score? It was quite frankly awful.

The animation was really bad, it didn't flow at all and it just looked blocky. You even had one bit repeated just as filler :/

The song was alright, quite annoying and screechy but not the worst I've heard. You timed the animation to the song decently to be honest but then again that is quite easy :S

Lastly, I have a big problem with people ripping off styles. On the flash forum, and cartoons I could quite easily find about 10-20 people who have stolen this "lazymuffin" style. Please, please, you may be alright at drawing in that style but if you do something original then people with respect you a lot more.

Overall try getting some unique style, don't copy lazymuffin (and you know you have, don't deny it >_>) I don't mind about the length, it was meant to be short but just try harder on the animation, make it smooth.

I hate writing reviews like this but it had to be said...

Rutger responds:

Pft. May I deny that I copied it, 'cos I didn't. Thanks.

And seriously, you copied my style! LOOK THOSE EYES AND MOUTH AND STUFF ARE THE SAME AS MINE.

Dude, just gtfo and stfu C:

[Snow (Hey Oh)]

Good job

That was so good :D You've really improved on your animating. Perhaps try with a faster frame rate? It seems a bit slow. Man this is under rated.

Snubby responds:

its running at 24 but im animating on doubles. near the end i was trying singles tho, anyway thanks

[TA: 1]

Pretty cool

I love your animations :D They're so colourful. I can see quite a lot of effort was put into this, those fbf mouths take so damn long :)

Keep up the good work. Oh and also, I love your style even if it is a tad overused.

Maxaroni5 responds:

WOW REALLY? I like your style alot better, i think this one is horrible, but my wacom tablet is unworkable on this computer because i forgot the installation disc, SSSooooooooOOOOOoooOOoOOo, THIS pretty much sucks. Want to join the team? check out the co-authors profile.

[Drive Thru at KFC]

yeeyeye

I love your animations so much. I've put you on my favourite artists. I really like this but not as much as some of your others I must admit. However I like it when the knights helmet kept closing, it was a nice touch.

Keep up the good -- no, no, keep up the fantastic work.

Mandalorian-Jedi responds:

O_o

Um... Thanks! To this day, I still don't know why I made my brother-in-law a knight in armour...

[DOOMed_computer]

Hahaha, cool

I really loved this flash. I like your animating style and the voices were great. The humor wasn't very good as I thought there was going to be a much better ending punchline but otherwise it was very entertaining.

Too improve you need to: add shading, work on the backgrounds and perhaps when you do the voice of mario and luigi make them sound a bit more Italien.

Overall very good. I'd like to see more from you, oh and you spelt "computer" wrong in the title :)

RyanTime2 responds:

oh yea woops... and this is my firsta nd last flash possibly... and mario and luigi were "americanized" its t-shirts now and not the old school italian stuff... anywho I'll try to improve it...

[CandyHolics]

Hahaha. Cool.

Good Points:

The voices were good, very clear and suited the characters. The idea was pretty decent aswell, and it had a few funny jokes and refrences in there. The lip synching was perfect too :)

Bad Points:

The actual animation was pretty bad, meaning the movement of the characters was pretty jerky. Putting some tweens in there would have helped a lot or atleast a frame between the two movements would make it a whole deal better and smoother.

Overall:

It was enjoyable to watch. I can see you've put a lot of effort into this and it's payed off. I'm going to go check out your other stuff now.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, I am trying to improve on making my animations smoother, but thanks for the review and the criticism. I'll try adding more tween to see if that smooth things out. Thank you for the review.

[ShortShakespeare - Caeser]

Hey again :)

Hmm... that was alright I guess. I'm not sure what you were going for, either just a summary of the story or a comical summary. If you were going for funny perhaps make it a bit more in your face and random, otherwise it was decent.

It was very short, which is sometimes okay, but you need to make it more short and sweet. If it's going to be that short add shading and spend longer on the pictures.

Overall it was decent but I didn't really understand the story all too well so it didn't do it's job of summing it up :(

Keep up the good work anyhow.

Timsplosion responds:

Ah well, sorry this didn't live up to your expectations. It was mainly made out of boredom anyway. The basic story is that someone predicts that Caeser's gonna die, then his friend Brutus kills him. Personally I thought that it was summed up pretty well, but meh, each man to his own opinion.