Lazyfeet's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aristocrat Joke]

Right?

No, I definitely did not get that. Eh well, cute anyhoo :P

[The FLF Collab]

YEY.

Nice one :)

I really enjoyed that. The score is ace.

doomshock responds:

tell me about it, lol!
thanks you

[MetroidPrimeCatastrophe 2]

It was decent :)

The animation was very smooth, even though it was a tween heaven. Also the drawings were decent and you could tell you had spent a while drawing them.

However the humour was very childish and very slapstick. For instance Spire annoyed the crap out of me as he repeated the same punch line over and over. So I'd try and get a better script writer next time, someone who isn't 6 year olds.

The voice acting was good as well, TheHande and TomaMato did a very good job while the rest were of good quality.

Overall, the animation was good, the voice acting was swell but you just need a better plot and script.

(Oh and it was hard to tell who was talking because I didn't recognize those video game characters as I'm not really into games.)

Shadowii2 responds:

Yep, this was probably my last "only-tweens" submission, as I hate gotten little fed up with tweening everything.

And it's just that I don't have very mature humor and that I don't like adding abusive, racist, cock jokes and so on.

I'm not really that good animator script writing wise, I used to have a lots of original thoughts but seems I can't pull them off when it comes to making actually something.

And I see, probably those people will like this more who have played the games, or at least Metroid Prime Hunters on NDS.

[Sprite A Day: Funeral]

Up until now I didn't know what SaD was :P

And now I've watched a few I love them :D However I do agree with people, sprite a week would be better, you can spend longer on your parts, get more people to join and get better scores and people won't accuse you of spamming up the portal. Also the humour would stay more fresh as people wouldn't be seeing it every day.

Perhaps skit a day would be better so anyone could join in :) I'd happily make one but I don't really like using sprites and I find it hard to add humour into them :P

Or even still do one every day but only submit them all as a big collaboration at the end of the week. Suggestions r phun.

[Daze of our Lives 4]

Review power :]

Yeah, I liked it. I really did. It had some charm to it which made it watchable and strangely like-able. However...

I thought the drawings were rather crude and a bit blocky and the animation wasn't really that fluent. I thought there should have been more of it as well as most of the time the characters were stationery and not really doing much :S

The voice acting was good, I liked the fact it was a group of friends just doing a fun lil cartoon. The script wasn't the best, some of the jokes fell heavy and the punch lines were expected but the whole thing was still of good quality and, despite the dramatic change of plot for understandable reasons, I liked the idea. I thought the second one was actually a bit better as it was less cliche.

The best thing about it was the special features really. I liked the commentary and deleted scene. You seem like friendly, funny people :)

The one thing, a small personal question, is how could he just decide he doesn't want to be your friend anymore? I didn't like the way you bad mouthed him to be honest so this reason better be sex tacular.

I'm a sucker for these kind of cartoons, as I made one myself. A couple of friends writing and voice acting a nice little story :P I thought it needed to be reviewed for that reason. I'd love to see more of these and I'm looking forward to seeing the score.

So overall, not the best animated and drawn cartoon but I still really liked it :) I hope you show your friends these reviews too. Make 'em put some funny input which I'm sure they're capable of [insert more kiss ass here.]

Anyhoo, I've rambled on for way too long, it shows how bored I am. Perhaps a 74 hour gaming session is what I need? ^_^ Keep up the good work blaw blawh.

MrBallistic responds:

Have you ever seen someone hit a dog? Yeeeah, thats what that friend did to me. Maybe i wasnt clear enough on what a fucker he is. Oh, and your going to need a 78 hour gaming session to break my record! Seriously though, this is the best review Iv ever seen. I shall take all of this into effect!

[Sonic the Unstoppable]

Nice one!

I wasn't expecting that :D Good job on the animation, very smooth indeed. I like your humor, I thought it was just going to be like every other sonic animation but it was more unique.

(Good lil pun at the end there.)

[Michelle & Feo Pilot]

I smell 'underrated'

That was fantastic. I've always loved your animations, the unique style, the flawless animation. The humor was really good and I love the characters you've designed in this. I don't know how it got such a low score but still a massive thumbs up from me.

Good job :)

[BEEP BEEP]

I don't like writing reviews like this...

But sometimes these things need to be said. I have to say that was rather shocking, can you honestly say that you deserved front page, daily 5th and that high a score? It was quite frankly awful.

The animation was really bad, it didn't flow at all and it just looked blocky. You even had one bit repeated just as filler :/

The song was alright, quite annoying and screechy but not the worst I've heard. You timed the animation to the song decently to be honest but then again that is quite easy :S

Lastly, I have a big problem with people ripping off styles. On the flash forum, and cartoons I could quite easily find about 10-20 people who have stolen this "lazymuffin" style. Please, please, you may be alright at drawing in that style but if you do something original then people with respect you a lot more.

Overall try getting some unique style, don't copy lazymuffin (and you know you have, don't deny it >_>) I don't mind about the length, it was meant to be short but just try harder on the animation, make it smooth.

I hate writing reviews like this but it had to be said...

Rutger responds:

Pft. May I deny that I copied it, 'cos I didn't. Thanks.

And seriously, you copied my style! LOOK THOSE EYES AND MOUTH AND STUFF ARE THE SAME AS MINE.

Dude, just gtfo and stfu C: