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Creepy...

But still great.

KNOCK KNOCK!

MarkyLyne responds:

Whos there ? ;D

Out of 171 submissions

This is my 4th favourite. I keep watching it, it's so addictive! It's not even very long or that funny. But I can't stop watching!

TimAves responds:

Thanks dude (:

Woopdidoo

This one got a much better score :D

Oh and everyone, click on the '12' (on the clock) for a sexual panda. He makes me want to take off my clothes and smother whip cream EVERYWHERE. He'll do the same to you. No jokes.

</constructive criticism>

sickstick responds:

LMAO, you rock LF.

Your stuff is awesome

~Good Points~

I loved how simple this was. I remember ages ago I saw your submission about the balloon and these two are very similar. Just cute little drawings with cute little characters. The choice of music was good too :) Animation was also ace, especially the blur effect when the fish moved down.

~Bad Points and How to Improve~

Get better voice actors or a better mic so it sounds clearer. Also there wasn't really a punchline, if you're having something this short at least try and have a pun of some sort otherwise it really is just a couple of seconds of dialogue. The cuteness was ruined a bit by the swearing but then again, it's Newgrounds. It probably boosted your score by .60 :D

~Overall~

Overrated but still, that was a nice little flash.

NextToNothing responds:

Voice acting has always been an issue I do it myself and I generally just sound terrible. The one curse wasn't even in the script I just mindlessly said it while recording and it was the only take I liked, I didn't even really want it in there XP.

I don't usually go for a punch line because not only do I suck at them, I generally don't find em funny. It's a lot easier for me to make something where the whole of it is irony and just accept some people are going to find it clever, while others aren't, and still others aren't going to quite get it at all (not saying you didn't it's pretty clear you did).

Thanks for the nice constructive review noted and I'll probably start to plan things out farther in advance, and get some solid voice actors. I'll try to figure out how to write funny punch-lines... just for you =)

(Bah overrated scores lower then my Balloon and money shorts ;_;)

That was terrifying I guess...

I'm not really sure what I just watched. But, hey, nice movie anyhows.

How to improve? Lay off those drugs.

LOVE ANDY XXXX <3

Awesome

If not a little underrated, this really deserves 3.60+

~Good Points~

Fitted the music perfectly, it was really colourful and imaginative if not a little trippy. The pictures weren't great but the simplicity was nice, not too much of an eye sore. The length was good too and the music, plain awesome.

~Bad Points and How to Improve~

The colours you used weren't very nice to look at being either incredibly dark or way too bright. The animation could be improved, especially on that falling into the water part as well as more time and effort could be spent on the drawings.

5/5, 8/10 Goodjob guys.

Very nice!

~Good Points~

It was just a really fun little music video. Nice lip syncing, stylish backgrounds and the drawings were simple but looked great. The animation, especially on the blinking eyes, was really smooth. The punch line was good too. Nice choice of music as well, I haven't heard it before.

~Bad Points and How To Improve~

Just make it longer I guess, I know about cutting it due to time constraints but... don't? :D Oh and I know the people are in your style but perhaps making them more detailed could improve your chances of winning the contest.

~Overall~

This was a little gem, I'm glad I watched it :)

nukyew2 responds:

Thanks for the tips! Im glad that NG has people like you :D

YOU DIRTY LITTLE SPAMMER!

I've been waiting for this for ages :D Surely you could get at least twice the length of this song with all your animations?

By the way, choice of music was good but could have been a lot better >:C

Also. Turnips.

Fantastic

The Rayman music really won it for me, it suited this really well. The whole thing was really well drawn and animated. It was also quite creepy and scary too so congratulations on that.

The plot wasn't very good though, that's probably something you need to work on. Still overall awesome 9/10!

I'm off to watch your other animations now.

Gosh o' golly

4.40!? Highest scoring collab ever made! This looked absolutely fantastic, you must have edited my part a little, it changed from really shoddy to not bad at all :D

Everyone's was absolutely fantastic though. I can't get over how good the final product looked. Aw, no co-author? :D

Goodjob y'all, especially Boogley.

TheBoogley responds:

I just added a couple of inbetweens at the start and end... :)

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